"Rejected"

"Rejected" (short), 2000. An animator makes horrible commercials. Written & Directed by Don Hertzfeldt. Starring Hertzfeldt & Robert May.

Concept: 4/4 (Great)
Story: 2/4 (Indifferent)
Characters: 2/4 (Indifferent)
Dialog: 4/4 (Great)
Pacing: 4/4 (Great)
Cinematography: 3/4 (Good)
Special effects/design: 4/4 (Great)
Acting: 3/4 (Good)
Music: 2/4 (Indifferent)
Subjective Rating: 9/10 (One of my favorites, 4/4 5/4). Some sort of non sequitur masterpiece.
Objective Rating (Average): 3.2/4 3.3/4 (Very good)